Things that excite me

The thing that excites me is going to Splash Planet because I like going on the slides.

 I am scared when I go down the dark slide and I like going on the jeeps.  I like going on the playground because I go on the rocket and the plane.  I like Splash Planet. 

When I go by the cafe I smell delicious food and Mum buys me some cake.  After I eat the cake, I rush to the golf course.  When I get to the golf course, I pick a club and a ball.  I put the ball down and hit it.  I look where the ball is and I swing the club.  I hit the ball, it goes over the bridge and into the hole.  After that I go to the lazy river and relax.

By Ben.