Wednesday, March 21, 2012

Brayden's animal story

We have been planning an adventure story about an animal of our choice.  We have to plan it first and write the first sentence.  The sentence has to grab our attention and make us want to keep reading.
Enjoy Brayden's story!


I'm in the jungle and a snake's after me!!!

It really wants a meal and I'm its main course!  There's a clearing up ahead.  I'll fight it there!  It's a dangerous Cobra but I don't care!!!  In the clearing I see the full snake.  It's alot bigger than I thought.  I must have only seen the front bit.  I'm really nervous!!

Suddenly, a knife appears from nowhere right in front of me.  I grab it, at least I have something to defend myself with. The snake leaps and just before it bites me I slice its head off.  I won the battle but I still have to get out of the jungle.

I get out of there alone and head for home.

The end.

By Brayden.


1 comment:

Mrs Grant said...

I am glad you got home safely. I would have been scared in the jungle. What an interesting story.